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01/15/2007
I, The Living
Maybe this is the last time
That I’ll try to write
These musings of an insane mind
What difference does it make anyways?
Now that I’ve known...
It’s no use singing
In the ‘City of Deafs’
It’s time to move on…
But I know not where
Some-place far away
Perhaps into the realm of fantasies
Where love and life entices everyone
To sing the song of their dreams
It’s time to move on
Of that I am sure
Beyond the green meadows
Into the cloud caressed vales
My footsteps leading me… slowly…
Into an unknown abstractness
Far, far away from the make-beliefs.
Courage filling up my heart now
For that last leap of faith
My Kingdom has finally arrived
And it’s time to move on.
I was alive till now
Now its time for me to LIVE
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It is kinda feeling empty..when u directed that.... maybe this is last time u r writing..And it is disheartening when u thought that ur work is insane musings of ur mind...Specially after writin a big deal u think that...Actually each work of urs must be close to ur heart when u created it..It is like mother u've nurtured ur blog..I feel.. a mother can't stop feeding her child at any point and time..I can percieve that every poem of urs would have given u a sense of satisfaction and happiness in its own way...write for urself if not for others..and this is what u've been doing..isn't it??
It is quite obvious to get disheartened by this make-believe world, where our voice seems to reach no where...But a traveller jst thinks abt his destination and not abt the hurdles..
All i know is..if u stop writing..u'll lose urself. And there are very few ppl on earth who have themselves with them.
Regards and Best Wishes ahead.
Posted by: Neha | 12/29/2006
Is this not the exact feeling that keeps a man going all his life??? Life is the best mystery... the only puzzle we cannot solve yet we donot stop trying... thriving to find out.... find out something that we know, but do we???
i donot know.. its awesome how uve worded this abstraction!
Posted by: Sazeal | 01/06/2007
I think i was bit impulsive in writing the above comment...
..."It’s no use singing In the ‘City of Deafs’ "
This line is bitter truth...no one can deny...yet ppl find ways to escape it...n i think i was doing that..
Posted by: Neha | 01/22/2007
Good to see the progress u hv made so far. Congratulations!!
Posted by: Neha | 07/05/2008